Could you correct my letter
Would you help with my job letter please.?
Dear Sir or Madam
Please consider this letter as an application for the job of Coordinator in yopur travel business. I found out about this opportunity by the add on the news paper last week.
I consider my self to be a responsible, organised, I have excellent communication skills and experience on the area. I like to be up dated on technolgy (internet, email, etc) I have the ability to work in group and meeting people,
I will be happy to meet you at your convience and discuss how my education and experience match your needs. You can reach me at my home address at 15259588