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Thank you for your email. As I mentioned earlier Iím really interested in taking photos. So, I want to continue my education in Canada by taking a short course in a digital photo. I think it would be a good addition to my primary degree.
I would be pleased if you could help me with collecting relevant information about courses such as subjects which are included, cost, duration, etc.
Iím thrilled to hear that I can share a flat with your friends and at the same time making new friends and saving money on accommodations.
Regarding our leisure I prefer doing a trip to the Rockey Mountain because I really like magnificent natural landscapes and maybe Iíll have opportunity to practice in taking photos.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.