Request access to XXX account

Hi, I would appreciate if you could verify my request letter below. is it appropriate? Let me know if I need to modify it.

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Subject: Request access to XXX account

Dear Mr. [Approver],

I would like to request access to XXX account. This is required so that I can perform my day to day job.
Thank you very much for your kind assistance and quick approval of my request.

Thanks and best regards,
[My Name]

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Dear Mr. [Approver],

I would like This is to request access to XXX account as a requirement to perform my routine responsibilities.. This is required so that I can perform my day to day job.
Thank you very much for your kind assistance and quick I look forward to your approval of my request.

Thanks and best regards,
[My Name]