Help with thank you letter

Hello everybody. I am writing a thank you letter and asking for a letter of recommendation to one of my supervisor at the lab where I work.

I have copy the letter at the bottom of this message.

Could you please check for any errors or suggestions.


Thank you


Dago


Dear X,


I had a great experience working with you at the laboratory. I have learned new things for my life. I discovered the beauty in research. This is something that I wish to continue as part of my life.
Thank you for all the time and dedication that you put on mentoring me.
I am planning to apply for a fellowship. I would like to ask you for a letter of recommendation for my application. Let me know if you can send you the forms for my letter of recommendation.

I wish you all the best in your new projects.



Thanks again,

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Originally Posted by dago54

Hello everybody. I am writing a thank you letter and asking for a letter of recommendation to one of my supervisors at the lab where I work.

I have copy copied the letter at the bottom of this message.

Could you please check for any errors or suggestions?


Thank you.


Dago


Dear X,


I had a great experience working with you at the laboratory. I have learned new things for my life. I learnt/learned a lot and I discovered the beauty in of research. This is something that I wish to continue with. as part of my life.
Thank you for all the time and dedication that you put on into mentoring me.
I am planning to apply for a fellowship and I would like to ask you for a letter of recommendation for my application. Let me know if you can send you the forms for my letter of recommendation. If you would be happy to do so, please let me know and I will send you the relevant forms.

I wish you all the best in your new projects.

Thanks again,

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See above for my suggestions.