Could you correct this letter, Please?:DDD

[Taleen]

Hi Dr.

The forms are done. I went to my university and I asked three professors to fill out the letters.
Today, my husband will go to the Admission Office to give the envelope to Ms Marly.

I think I will get the IELTS result after 16^th September. Can I register before getting the IELTS result?

Regards,

[RubberDucky]

I'm finding it a bit difficult to understand the context in which this letter is written. Is it supposed to be formal or informal?

[alizekri]

Hi Dr.

The forms have done completely. I went to my university and made a request with three professors to do that.
Today, my husband will go to the Admission Office to give that to Ms Marly.

I think I will get the IELTS result after 16^th September.
Would it be possible to accept me before the IELTS result?

Regards,