please check my letter
Teacher, please check my letter.
I would like to take three weeks' leave from February 4 to 22, 2013 to visit my 80-year old father who lives in Shanghai. I have not seen him for almost three years and wish to spend more time with him. I have two weeks holiday for next year and I will apply for one week unpaid. Please approve my request. Thank you.
Re: please check my letter
Instead of "Please approve etc.", you might say "I respctfully request your approval" and there is no need for an apostrophe with "weeks". Otherwise OK.
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