Correct my cover letter please!!!!!!!

[uja0514]

Hi,
could u correct my cover letter, please?

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Dear Hiring Manager,

I am writing to apply for the Multi-Media Designer position advertised in Jobbridge.ie. I obtained my bachelor's degree in Information Science and Telecommunication from Hanshin University, South Korea in February of this year and am very interested in web development areas. I have permission to work in Ireland and my CV is enclosed for your review and consideration.

I am a fast learner person, highly motivated and able to work under pressure. I am always willing to learn new skills in order to enhance my abilities. During my study I have had a great deal of laboratory experience in Computer graphics. A range of projects with lab members enabled to develop my project management skills and my experiences as a leader in the lab have given me the capacity to manage teamwork and problem-solving and multi-tasking.

I am sure that I will be useful member of your team in your company. I can be available for interview at any time. Should you have any questions before that time, you may reach me via email at xxxxxxxxxx or by phone at xxx-xxxxxxxxx.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours sincerely,

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Thank u in advance!

[billmcd]

Hi,
could u correct my cover letter, please?

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Dear Hiring Manager,

I am writing to apply This is my application for the Multi-Media Designer position advertised in Jobbridge.ie. I obtained my bachelor's degree in Information Science and Telecommunication from Hanshin University, South Korea in February of this year and I am very interested in the web development area. I have permission to work in Ireland and my CV is enclosed for your review and consideration.

I am a fast learner person, highly motivated and able to work under pressure. I am always willing to learn new skills in order to enhance my abilities and to contribute to the organization. During my study I have had a great deal of laboratory experience in Computer graphics. A range of projects with lab members enabled me to develop my project management skills and my experiences as a leader in the lab have given me the capacity to manage teamwork and develop problem-solving and multi-tasking skills.

I am sure confident that I will can be useful member a valuable and productive asset to your team in your company. I can be am available for an interview at any time. Should you have any questions before that time, you may reach me via email at xxxxxxxxxx or by phone at xxx-xxxxxxxxx.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours sincerely,

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Thank u in advance!

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