Formal e-mail to a university, is it correct?

[Alex15]

Hi! So I need to write an e-mail to some universities asking the entry requirements for international students, I wrote this but I don't know if I should correct some things. I'd really appreciate any help with this. This is the e-mail:

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing you to request more information about your Engineering course at ____ University. I am really interested in this course and I would love to apply for it in your remarkable university in 2014.

I’m currently studying 1º de Bachillerato in Spain so firstly I would like to ask you about this qualification: could you please indicate if the Spanish Bachillerato is one of your accepted qualifications? If so, I would be grateful if you could indicate the academic entry requirements of _____ University for the Spanish students as well.

Secondly, I would greatly appreciate some information about the English Language Requirements for EU Applicants from a non English speaking country. I also would like to ask the following question: would I be classed as a home/EU student or international student for fees purposes?

Thank you in advance for your attention to this matter. I look forward to receiving your response.

Yours faithfully,


Thank you so much in advance!

[billmcd]

Hi! So I need to write an e-mail to some universities asking the entry requirements for international students, I wrote this but I don't know if I should correct some things. I'd really appreciate any help with this. This is the e-mail:

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing you This is to request more information about your Engineering course at ____ University. I am really extremely interested in this course and I would love am anxious to apply for it in your remarkable renowned university for admission in 2014.

I’m (avoid contractions in formal correspondence) I am currently studying 1º de Bachillerato in Spain so firstly first, I would like to ask you about this inquire about qualification and in particular, could you please indicate if is the Spanish Bachillerato is one of your accepted qualifications? If so, I would be grateful if you could indicate the academic entry requirements of _____ University for the Spanish students as well.

Secondly Second, I would greatly appreciate some information about the English language requirements for EU Applicants from a non-English speaking country . I also would like to ask the following question: and, if accepted and enrolled, would I be classed classified as a home/EU student or as an international student for fees purposes?

Thank you in advance for your attention to this matter my request. I look forward to receiving your response.

Yours faithfully sincerely,

Thank you so much in advance!

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[Alex15]

Thanks a lot!! Your post really helped me. Let me ask you one last question please, because I forgot to add the scholarship thing! Do you thing it would be correct if after "and, if accepted and enrolled, would I be classified as a home/EU student or as an international student for fees purposes?" I added: "Would I be elegible for any scholarship?"? Thanks again!

[billmcd]

Thanks a lot!! Your post really helped me. Let me ask you one last question please, because I forgot to add the scholarship thing! Do you thing it would be correct if after "and, if accepted and enrolled, would I be classified as a home/EU student or as an international student for fees purposes?" I added: "Would I be elegible for any scholarship?"? Thanks again!

I would add, "And finally, would I ........"