PLEASE could correct my formal letter I try to get MA recommendation from a professor

Dear Mr ,

I am writing this letter to request a recommendation to acquire the admission to Bridge entry , I am extremely interested in (....) University
and .



Due to the deadline date for Bridge Entry in (.....) University, I do not have much time to meet the requirement of English proficiency.

My last academic (IELTS) test was 6.5 for each except Writing 5.5 and Speaking 6.0.

I have BA in English literature and language, I have an experience as a teacher.

Currently, I am international student in Canada, I study in international College.

I will be honored if you kindly recommended my admission to your University.

I am looking forward to receiving your response.

Best Regards,


PLEASE correct my letter and it is about asking a recommendation from a professor to help me to get an admission o MA program.