Re: Please correct my email answer!

Originally Posted by
Alpenblume
It would be very nice, if you could correct this email! I thank you very much!
Dear ...,
Thank you for your message and the information regarding the contract. The conditions
sounds sound very good.
I still have some questions
or rather and concerns, because
it still has to go very fast now and there are only a few days until the first of February.
He said it would be no problem to get a furnished "start flat"
for the first time initially over the
company business premises (
there are
there some in-house flats?). If
it would be so that is the case, when
could I
could move into the apartment and for how long
would it
would be possible to stay there (how long
time until I have to look for
a my own flat?)
The My other question
would be is whether the company
would take over pay the my relocation costs for the move from Biberach to Vienna.
My late employers had been taken this ever as well as the cost of the first arrival - I have absolutely no idea what you wanted to say with this sentence. It makes no sense. I saw in the Short Guide that this is taken for post-docs and PhD students. How would
that be that work in my case and how
exactly would we proceed
(ie who awards the contract)? exactly (who award the contract...?)
Do you need
some any documents from me?
If so, I
should already can e-mail
or post them to you. to you or to send it by post! Best wishes, Yours sincerely/faithfully (as appropriate)
....
See above.
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