help in writing job interest letter

[sandykhattar]

Hi,
Could you please help me in making correction in this job interest letter?

Firstly, I would like to thank you for giving me this opportunity to express my interest and background in teaching field.

I started developing interest in teaching when I was in 12th grade. I used to love guiding younger children in their studies, homework, and school projects. While perceiving higher studies in science and education, I started tutoring .I used to get tremendous happiness and confidence by transferring my knowledge to others.

I learnt and strongly believe that “Learning starts right form birth and continues until we reach the graveyard. Thus, I started loving the children’s company; their curiosity, innocence and honesty, and also my passion towards science subject are some of the reasons that made me to take up the job in teaching field.


When I accompanied my husband to United States in the year 2000, I really wanted to start my carrier but I was not eligible to work in U.S. After, getting the work permit, I grabbed the opportunity to work with toddlers with the “Beyond Basic Learning” and “Kiddie Galileo” as I was very much desperate to start my carrier back.

I was very much happy to hear from Stevens and I am strongly interested in this position for the following reasons.


· It would be wonderful opportunity to join with one of the huge, well established and reputed schools of jersey city


· It would be best opportunity to work and learn with experienced teachers.

· I have a hope that this position would definitely help me to grow professionally higher in Stevens.

· It would an excellent opportunity working with children from a wide range of cultural background which I had observed in Stevens when I spent my time.

My personal qualities like warmth, enthusiasm, strong organizational skills, ability to motivate and inspire children, drawing skills, math abilities, story telling, art, dance , music, singing, communication skills with children and parents, my strong desire in growing in teaching field and keen in working with experienced teachers are some of my strengths that would make me eligible for this assistant post.

Thank You So much for your attention.

Regards,

[susiedqq]

I would like to thank you for giving me this opportunity to express my interest in the Assistant's job opening at Stevens.

I found I had an interest in teaching when I was in 12th grade. I enjoyed guiding younger children in their studies, homework, and school projects. While persuing higher studies in science and education, I started tutoring. I found that I received personal happiness when transferring my knowledge to others. I especially enjoy the children’s company and their curiosity, innocence and honesty. My passion for science subject is another reason that I am interested in the teaching field.

When I accompanied my husband to United States in the year 2000, I wanted to start my career, but I was not eligible in the U.S. After receiving proper permits, I took the opportunity to work with toddlers, using the “Beyond Basic Learning” and “Kiddie Galileo” curriculum.

I am interested in this position for the following reasons.

· It would be wonderful opportunity to join a well-established and reputable school in Jersey City

· It would be an opportunity to work with and learn from experienced teachers.

· This position would help me grow professionally at Stevens.

· It would an excellent opportunity to work with children from a wide range of cultural backgrounds.

My personal qualities include a personal warmth, enthusiasm, strong organizational skills, and ability to motivate and inspire children. I am experienced in drawing skills, math abilities, story telling, art, dance, music, singing, and communication skills parents.

Thank you for your consideration of my job application.

Regards,