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Hello to all..

I want to write a short application for a job opening. Would be grateful if could tell me how to improve it. Draft of the same is given below:

Dear Sirs,

This has reference to your application in -------(name of newspaper) dated 21-01-2008 for the post of Process Executives.

I would like to put forth my candidature for your consideration. I have a total of 5 years of work experience, with two years of experience as Process Executive in -----(name of organisation). Rest of the details are enclosed in my resume.

Request you to please peruse the same and call me for an interview, so that I could give you further details about myself.

Thanking you and awaiting an early response from you.

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Dear Sirs,

With reference to your advertisement in -------(name of newspaper) dated 21-01-2008 for the post of Process Executive, I am writing to apply for this position.

I have worked for the past five years, with two years of experience as Process Executive in -----(name of organisation). The job you are advertising will be a good progression from this one. Enclosed is a copy of my [cv/resume], which I hope will be of interest to you.

I am available for interview at any time, and can be contacted either at the address and telephone number above, or on my mobile/cell phone ................

I will look forward to hearing from you [in the near future/very soon].

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Thanks Anglika!!

Really appreciate the help!! The application looks much better now!!
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