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Old 11-Apr-2008, 10:15
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Default How to improve this short text.

Can some one please improve the following short text, and if possible please provide the reason of removal, addition of any thing from the text.

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Please find below, a list of the tasks that I have performed in this month, and those I plan to do in next month.
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Default Re: How to improve this short text.

Please find below, a list of the tasks that I have performed in this month, and those I plan to do in next month.

Please find below, (no comma - no need for a pause)

a list of the tasks that I have performed in (omit 'in')

this month, and those I plan to do

next month.
or
in the coming month.
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Thanks David
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