Relieving Letter!

[Farhaj]

Hi Tdol and Team,
Please help me to write a error free resignation/relieving letter. I got another job in Government Department so I want to go there through proper channel, though I have not applied through proper channel because before the current job I had applied there also. So Please correct following letter and add something very courteous notes:-

Respected Sir,

It is submitted that I have been appointed as Stenographer in Finance Division since June, 2006. I had applied in Senate Secretariat for the post of Stenographer in May, 2006 before the appointment in Finance Division.

I have received offer letter (No.) Date () for the post of Stenographer BS-15 in Senate Secretariat, Photocopy of which is herewith submitted for your kind consideration.

It is, therefore, requested you that I may kindly be relieved from 25.04.2008 after finishing of office hours to continue my service as Stenographer in Senate Secretariat. I would be very grateful if I may also be granted a lien.

Yours Obediently,

Muhammad Farhaj.

[susiedqq]

Respected Sir,

I was appointed as Stenographer in Finance Division June, 2006. I had applied for the Senate Secretariat post of Stenographer in May, 2006 before I was appointed in the Finance Division.

I received an offer letter (No.) Date () for the post of Stenographer BS-15 in Senate Secretariat. A photocopy of which is submitted for your consideration.

I am therefore requesting that I may kindly be relieved from my post as of 25.04.2008 end of office hours in order to continue my service as Stenographer in Senate Secretariat.

I would be very grateful if I may also be granted a lien. (I don't understand what this means)

Yours Obediently,

Muhammad Farhaj.