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Old 27-Apr-2008, 10:57
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hi
i have to write a formla letter to my head of year and to inform him where do we want to go for the trip and also i have to use persuasive technique
can you help how to start my letter from please and even how to write it
thank you so much
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Old 27-Apr-2008, 11:25
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Welcome to the forums.

First read through this: Formal Letter Writing - Articles - UsingEnglish.com.

Then, write what you think you should say and post it. Someone can then advise you.
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Old 27-Apr-2008, 16:27
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Originally Posted by Dounya8 View Post
I have to write a formula letter to my head of year telling him where do we want to go for the trip.
In most cases we say tell and not inform.

This doesn't seem like a form letter to me.
What is a head of year?

Write your letter, then post it here. We will give you advice.

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