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Old 28-Apr-2008, 10:17
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i need help me in writting formal letter????????

Write a formal application letter for a job you have seen advertised in a newspaper.....
Introduction and purpose for writing????????
Description of education and experince??????
Request for information or action????????

Write your letter ????????

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Old 28-Apr-2008, 12:42
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How could anyone write about your education and experience? I think you are meant to do the writing. If you do that, people will comment and make suggestions, but no one will write it for you.
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Old 28-Apr-2008, 12:42
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i need help me in writting formal letter????????

Write a formal application letter for a job you have seen advertised in a newspaper.....
Introduction and purpose for writing????????
Description of education and experince??????

Request for information or action????????


Write your letter ????????

thank you
Noor 101

I think you need to write your application letter and it can then be checked
on the site. There are plenty of members who will proof read it for you.


Regards
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Noor 101


I think you need to write your application letter and it can then be checked
on the site. There are plenty of members who will proof read it for you.


Regards

Stilo

need help me in writting formal letter????????


Write a formal application letter for a job you have seen advertised in a newspaper.....just
Introduction and purpose for writing just

everyone writting opininon them......
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need help me in writting formal letter????????


Write a formal application letter for a job you have seen advertised in a newspaper.....just
Introduction and purpose for writing just


everyone writting opininon them......
Noor101

Sorry I do not understand your reply. Please attempt to write the application letter.
Stilo
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eduction::
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§ Graduated from community college in computer science, diploma, May 2007
§ Course in Computer Maintenance Field from PMPQE Prince Mohammad Bin Fahad Program , , July 2007
§ English Course, six months , New Horizon , 2005.
§ High school,Scientific section, , July 2003


I am writing this letter to apply for the position of engineering department that I saw advertised on your (alyaum) news of march 20 , 2008.
I Graduated from community college computer science diploma on May 2007.and received high grades in both my English and Business Courses. I got job as served as a computer consultant at the college's computer center for six months where I helped train users to work with new systems. In addition, we had to use all of the Microsoft Office programs in the preparation of our finished assignments, so I am able to do most things with computers. But last year I took Course in Computer Maintenance Field from PMPQE Prince Mohammad Bin Fahad Program , , July 2007.

I expect to receive a Bachelor of Science degree in information technology from The Arabia Opening University in June and by that time will have completed the Computer Systems Engineering Program.


I Trained in Saab Bank for Six-month in costumers' service, This experience has given me the ability to deal with the needs of all types of people. I worked as a programmed in Engineering department for one year, so I had the experience in programming that I can deal with anything in this matter.
احد يرتب لي رساله عدل ؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟ضروريييي
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Education::
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§ Graduated from community college in computer science, diploma, May 2007
§ Course in Computer Maintenance Field from PMPQE Prince Mohammad Bin Fahad Program , , July 2007
§ English Course, six months , New Horizon , 2005.
§ High school,Scientific section, , July 2003


I am writing this letter to apply for the position[what position?] of engineering department [within the engineering department] that I saw advertised on your (alyaum) news of March 20 , 2008.


In March 2007, I graduated from community college [if this the name of the college, then Community College of [town] ] with a computer science diploma. I received high grades in both my English and Business courses. I got job as served [worked/had a job] as a computer consultant in the college's computer center for six months where I helped train users to work with new systems. In addition, we had to use all of the Microsoft Office programs in the preparation of our finished assignments, so I am able to do most things with computers. Last year I took a course in Computer Maintenance through the PMPQE Prince Mohammad Bin Fahad Program, completed in July 2007.

I expect to receive a Bachelor of Science degree in Information Technology from The Arabia Opening University in June and by that time will have completed the Computer Systems Engineering Program.


I trained in Saab Bank for six months in customer services. This experience has given me the ability to deal with the needs of all types of people. I also worked as a programmer in the Engineering Department[where?] for one year, so I have experience in programming and can deal with anything in this field.

احد يرتب لي رساله عدل ؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟ضروريييي
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You need a concluding para. I suggest:

I hope that my training and skills will be of interest, and shall look forward to hearing from you soon. I am available for interview and can be contacted by phone on [number] or by e-mail [address].
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ممكن تعطيني ايميلك وارسلك الرساله كامله بالجدول ؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟
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ممكن تعطيني ايميلك وارسلك الرساله كامله بالجدول ؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟

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Noor - this is an English forum!
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ممكن تعطيني ايميلك وارسلك الرساله كامله بالجدول ؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟
I know you are in a hurry, but...
Just relax.
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