Tenancy @ Setia ＡＬＡＭ

[yuehshin]

Dear Sir,

RE : TENANCY @ SETIA ALAM
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The above matter refers.

Thank you for inviting us to join your esteem organization. We are pleased to accept your invitation. However, we hope that you could reduced the rental from RM4.30/sq ft to RM3.80/sq ft.

We will try to implement our renovation and decoration on our outlet and we will advertise publicity heavily.

We hope that your esteem organization will consider our request. Hope to hear from you soon.

Thank you.


Yours faithfully,




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[Anglika]

It would help us to know what you are asking. Do you want us to comment on the English?

[yuehshin]

Originally Posted by Anglika

It would help us to know what you are asking. Do you want us to comment on the English?

kindly correct my sentence and grammar. thank you.