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| ** can omit it? |
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| Thank your for your photos. However, there were not any protection on these containers’ floor? We had advised (required) you to put a (the) plastic film on the container floor for each container before shipment but you did not follow the same (it)? Please note that, this is a protection (ng) (to) for your company to avoid any complaint and claim from our customer in case (if) the goods had problem. Please take immediate action and do not invite (afraid) trouble (to) by not putting (put) the protection on the floor **(for all containers before shipping), even though their floor is clean. Please contact us again if you have any problem. ** can omit it? Delete words in the bracket. |
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In the photos sent, we noticed that protective sheeting was not placed under the containers before shipment. This procedure was put into place to protect your company from any complaints or claims from the customer. From this date forward, the procedure must be followed for each container, even if the floor is clean. Please contact us if you have any questions. |
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| Soup, you are a genius! You are a wonder! You are a miracle worker! |
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| Ron, step away from the bar. |
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| I would never have figured that one out. |
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| Hi Manas, Can I use "getting trouble" instead of "invite trouble" below ? Please take immediate action and do not invite trouble by not putting the protection on the floor, even though their floor is clean. Regards Zoe Last edited by Zoe2008; 15-Jun-2008 at 12:51. |
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Please take immediate action and do not invite trouble by not putting the protection on the floor.Once you have figured out how to say what you want to say then say it. Don't keep looking for new ways to say the same thing. In a business letter you want to get to the point. (It's not creative writing.) Do you think you are making progress? |
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| Hi RonBee, No, I do not agreed with you. I just feel 'invite trouble' is so strange, and try to find out the correct word but not make progress. I only want to learn more ! Regards Zoe |
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Please take immediate action and do not avoid to put the protection on the floor, even though their floor is clean. |
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