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Old 19-Jun-2008, 13:14
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I`m new here =)

I have written a leave letter but I don`t know if its correct.


Dear Sir,

By this I would like to apply vacation for the period
24 july 2008 till 24 august 2008. Because I`m going to
have a wedding party. I would like to enjoy this special
occasion with my family, cousins and friends.

Thank you very much for your consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Maria


Thank you in advance
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Old 19-Jun-2008, 13:28
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Dear Sir,

This letter is a request for a month's vacation from 24 July 2008 to 24 August 2008 as I will be getting married and would like to enjoy this special occasion with my family and friends.

Thank you for considering my request.

Sincerely yours,
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