Job Application's Cover Letter needs proofreading + comments

My name is Pitak, a recently graduate architect. the following is my cover letter. not sure if it sounds substantial enough. Those in the know, please comment:

Dear Ms. Kim Balchin,

I am writing to apply for a position of architectural assistant at your office because I am passionate about the subject of building design and would like to contribute my skills to your practice. As an admirer of quality construction and space, I have been pursuing my commitment to the subject and recently qualified from RIBA part 1 in architecture from the University of East London, as you will find from my C.V. enclosed giving my particular skills that relevant to your requirement.

Through five years of studying architecture and design, I have developed good presentation skills and precision in detail design and the use of materials. My experiences included designing building in different sites in many cities and cultures, which involved working with research method and strategy process. In addition to my degree in architecture, I have also developed skills in customer service and team management while working in a furniture department team at Habitat Ltd.With these qualities and strong belief in my design, I wish to become part of Scott Brownrigg team. Please kindly consider.

I am looking forward to hearing from you and would welcome the opportunity to meet you.

Yours sincerely,

Pitak Chaijumroonpun.

[Casiopea]

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