please help me out.

[jkm123]

HI all
I'm new on here and would like some help.
i work in the health care industry and I've just applied for a new job. the new job is a court manager. i have had a interview for this job before and i was told i just missed out on getting it, and that my letter skills let me down.
the problem i have is they ask you to do a in tray exercise which involves writing a letter to health and safety. IE: if a flat/house is on fire the window was smashed and the curtains are on fire, what would you do. then it says write a letter to the health and safety explaining what you did. i know what to do, the problem I'm having is to put it in writing.
thank you.

[Anglika]

Originally Posted by jkm123

HI all
I'm new on here and would like some help.
i work in the health care industry and I've just applied for a new job. the new job is a court manager. i have had a interview for this job before and i was told i just missed out on getting it, and that my letter skills let me down.
the problem i have is they ask you to do a in tray exercise which involves writing a letter to health and safety. IE: if a flat/house is on fire the window was smashed and the curtains are on fire, what would you do. then it says write a letter to the health and safety explaining what you did. i know what to do, the problem I'm having is to put it in writing.
thank you.

Welcome to the forums.

Could you write a letter containing what you would say, post it here and then we can comment on your approach and technique.

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