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Old 30-Sep-2008, 06:51
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Dear Aleck,

I am surprised to receive your email of Sep 10, 2008 regarding payment proof although I had already sent you the swift document of the payment upon your request against Proforma No. 210383 vide my email of July 15, 2008 reproduced below. Anyway, I am once again attaching the swift document of payment for your ready reference with a request to acknowledge the receipt of payment and update us about shipment status.

With regards to Proforma No.208308 mentioned in your both emails of July 14, 2008 and Sep 10, 2008 our record shows that we had received the order in Sep 2007 against this proforma and the file is closed. As such referring it in your emails seems to be an inadvertent error at your end.

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Dear Aleck,

I was surprised to receive your email of Sep 10, 2008 regarding proof of payment (See attached file) as I had emailed this to you July 15, 2008 (See my email below).

Please acknowledge the receipt of payment and update us on the shipping status.

Regarding Proforma No.208308, mentioned in your email on July 14, 2008 and on Sep 10, 2008, our record shows that we received the order Sep 2007 against this proforma and the file is now closed.

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Thanks a lot for taking out your precious time and correcting my mistakes. Now, the letter is sounding more simple and clear. Once again thanks, Soup!!
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