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Default Letter requesting to transfer cash

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Dear Sir

SUB: Request to transfer cash

I would like to transfer an amount of Rs.1000 from my account (Account No: xxxxxx) to X's account whose account no is yyy. She has an account in the Z branch of the same bank. I request you to take immediate action in this regard.

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Dear Sir: (add a colon)

Re: Request to transfer funds (cash is literal; it will be an electronic transfer, no cash involved)

I would like to transfer an amount of Rs.1000 from my account (Account No: xxxxxx) to the account of X, whose account no is yyy. She has an account in the Z branch of [name of bank].
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Please transfer these funds immediately and confirm by return when complete.


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Point of style.

British usage is a comma following salutation: Dear xxxx, and the ending would be Yours faithfully
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I'll grant you the comma, but personally, I like to keep faith out of discussions with banks.
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I'll grant you the comma, but personally, I like to keep faith out of discussions with banks.
I am faithful to my bank, so long as it keeps faith with me.
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