can any one tell me is it right or not

[adeel talib]

dear all please help me i am not sure the letter i have written is correct or not

[susiedqq]

There are several grammatical errors, AND the letter accuses someone of doing on-going illegal actions.

So you must be very clear about the purpose of the letter.

If you want a meeting with this person, then just tell him that in a short letter. Once in the meeting, you can discuss all the research you have.