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Socially Responsible Investing

Two October workshops on socially responsible investing will be offered in Seattle and Bellevue, by Certified Financial Planner, Eric A. Smith, and stock broker Wade Smith. The Humane Society will sponsor the Bellevue workshop on Oct. 8. Refreshments will be served and admission is free.

Socially screened investing emerged as the result of churches and pension funds that wanted to make investments consistent with their ethical values. In the last decade, however, socially responsible investing has grown from $40 Billion to over $900 billion annually. This increase has occurred because the idea has spread to many individual investors as well as other types of organizations.

Smith and Smith point out that most people carefully decide which organizations to donate time and money to each year. "Why"?, they ask, shouldn't people consciously choose amongst financially sound investments that meet there ethical, environmental, and social beliefs.

Call 1.800.234.5678 to make your reservation for this informative and interesting workshop

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Socially Responsible Investing

Two workshops in October on socially responsible investing will be offered in Seattle and Bellevue, by Certified Financial Planner, Eric A. Smith, and stock broker Wade Smith. The Humane Society will sponsor the Bellevue workshop on Oct. 8. Refreshments will be served and admission is free.

Socially screened investing emerged as a (the) result of churches and pension funds wanting (that wanted) to make investments consistent with their ethical values. In the last decade, however, socially responsible investing has grown from $40 Billion to over $900 billion annually. This increase has been possible (occurred) because the idea that has spread to many individual investors as well as other types of organizations.

Smith and Smith point out that most people carefully decide/chose which organizations to donate time and money in (to) each year. But "why"?, they ask, shouldn't people consciously choose amongst financially sound investments that meet their (there) ethical, environmental, and social beliefs.

Call xxxxx to make your reservation for this informative and interesting workshop

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