Please review my Motivation Letter

[nikoslav]

Hello everyone, my name is Zdenek and I am new here :) I would like someone to go through my short motivation letter and point out some stylistic or gramatic errors, I have to give them the letter tommorow, and I think it is okay, but just in case :


Dear Sir or Madam.

Having completed the four-year high school program at the Hejčín Gymnasium of Olomouc, I would very much like to study Graphic Design at Prague College, starting this January. I would like to apply for the two-year program in order to acquire the Higher National Diploma, with the opportunity to finish my Bachelors degree.
For the past two years, since my school offered very little help for my chosen career of graphic designer, I was self-teaching myself to become proficient with the tools and programs necessary, while working on either projects for fictive companies, my mother’s company, or various small subjects on the internet. I would like to specialize in corporate design and logo design, aiming to later broaden my field to be able to offer wider spectrum of services for my clients, such as web design or package design. Photography is a great passion for me, and one of my goals is to be able to use it in my career.
While I wouldn’t go as far as calling my four-year study at the Hejčín Gymnasium a waste of time, I was constantly dreaming of an education facility that would focus on Graphic Design. A school that could prepare me for achieving my high-set goals. I sincerely trust that Prague College is that facility.
The reason I chose a British school is to be able to use my English while getting better at it, to meet new people from around the world and to take advantage of the British education system, which in my opinion surpasses the Czech system.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours Faithfully,

Zdeněk Maruška