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Subject: ABC(raw material name) from XYZ Pharmaceutical Co. Ltd., China ----- mentioned in the space given for subject in email.

Dear Mr. Ali


We had imported 200 kilos ABC against your Indent # 1184/2005 dated 11.08.2005 vide Batch #. 20050801 dated 22.08.2005 with Specific Rotation Criteria: -95.0˚ ~ -103.0˚ and Result was -96.8˚.

Now we have Imported 200 kilos ABC against Indent #. 1305/2008 dated 08.09.2008 vide Batch #. M20080907 dated 15.10.2008 with Specification Rotation Criteria: -76.0˚ ~ 81.0˚ and Result -79.7˚.

There is a lot of difference in Specific Optical Rotation. Our Quality Control Department rejected this lot on that ground.

The Specific Optical Rotation must be of same Criteria of previous Batch #. 20050801.

We request you to advise your principal for replacement the consignment on urgent basis.

Both Certificate of Analysis are attached for your reference.

Looking forward to have favorable respond.

Best regards,
Shanz

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Dear Mr. Ali

We had imported 200 kilos of ABC against your Indent # 1184/2005 dated 11.08.2005 vide Batch #. 20050801 dated 22.08.2005 with Specific Rotation Criteria: -95.0˚ ~ -103.0˚ andResult was -96.8˚.

Now we have Imported 200 kilos ABC against Indent #. 1305/2008 dated 08.09.2008 vide Batch #. M20080907 dated 15.10.2008 with Specification Rotation Criteria: -76.0˚ ~ 81.0˚ and Result -79.7˚.

There is a lot of difference in Specific Optical Rotation. Our Quality Control Department rejected this lot on that ground.

The Specific Optical Rotation must be of same Criteria of previous Batch #. 20050801.

We request you to advise your principal for replacement the consignment on urgent basis.

Both Certificate of Analysis are attached for your reference.

Looking forward to have favorable respond.

Best regards,
Shanz
Dear Mr. Ali

We had imported 200 kilos of ABC against your Indent # 1184/2005 dated 11.08.2005 vide Batch #. 20050801 dated 22.08.2005 with Specific Rotation Criteria: -95.0˚ ~ -103.0˚ and Result was -96.8˚.

Now, we have Imported ( imported)200 kilos of ABC against Indent #. 1305/2008 dated 08.09.2008 vide Batch #. M20080907 dated 15.10.2008 with Specification Rotation Criteria: -76.0˚ ~ 81.0˚ and Result -79.7˚.

There is a lot of difference in Specific Optical Rotation. Our Quality Control Department rejected this lot on that ground.(There is a lot of difference in the Specific Optical Rotation due to which our Quality Control Department has rejected this lot.)

The Specific Optical Rotation must be on the same criteria which was set for the previous Batch #. 20050801.

We request you to advise your Principal for the replacement of the consignment on an urgent basis.

Both the certificates of analysis are attached for your reference.

Looking forward to having a favorable response.

Best regards,
Shanz

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Dear Mr. Ali

We had imported 200 kilos of ABC against your Indent # 1184/2005 dated 11.08.2005 vide Batch #. 20050801 dated 22.08.2005 with Specific Rotation Criteria: -95.0˚ ~ -103.0˚ and Result was -96.8˚.

Now, we have Imported ( imported)200 kilos of ABC against Indent #. 1305/2008 dated 08.09.2008 vide Batch #. M20080907 dated 15.10.2008 with Specification Rotation Criteria: -76.0˚ ~ 81.0˚ and Result -79.7˚.

There is a lot of difference in Specific Optical Rotation. Our Quality Control Department rejected this lot on that ground.(There is a lot of difference in the Specific Optical Rotation due to which our Quality Control Department has rejected this lot.)

The Specific Optical Rotation must be on the same criteria which was set for the previous Batch #. 20050801.
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Our apprehension is that why didn’t you deliver us the material with aforementioned difference… we haven’t set any standard.)

We request you to advise your Principal for the replacement of the consignment on an urgent basis.

Both the certificates of analysis are attached for your reference.

Looking forward to having a favorable response.

Best regards,
Shanz

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