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this is an inter-deptt. email
Dear Mr. …..,
The Quality Control Department has approved 100 Grams of Sodium Chloride from Changzhou Pharmaceutical Factory, China submitted through Gudia (Pvt) Limited, Karachi vide Q.C.R # 7327 & Q.A.R # BS08-0100 on 16.12.08.
You are requested to please manufacture a small batch to conduct a stability test before we are able to go into regular import.
Thank you for your attention to this request
Regards,
Shanz
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Re: this is an inter-deptt. email
Hello,
This email is hard to understand, especially the first part. I made slight adjustments as follows:
Dear Mr. …..,
The quality-control department has approved 100 grams of sodium chloride from Changzhou Pharmaceutical Factory, China, submitted through Gudia (Pvt) Limited, Karachi vide Q.C.R #7327 and Q.A.R #BS08-0100 on December 16, 2008.
You are requested to manufacture a small batch in order to conduct a stability test before we are able to import more.
Thank you for your attention to this matter.
Regards,
Shanz
-gord_l
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Re: this is an inter-deptt. email
Thank you so much gord_l 
Have a nice time!
Best regards,
Shanz
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