Is it correct?

ho0opy · #1 02-Jan-2009, 15:46

I really enjoy in each second of my vacation.On reason I love have a long free time to do whatever I want. When I have a long free time I can visit other countries by reading. Also I can learn a lot of things such as cooking and designing . And I can visit all my relative.

**RonBee** · #2 02-Jan-2009, 15:56

Quote:

Originally Posted by ho0opy

I really enjoy in each second of my vacation.

Say;

a lot of free time

**bhaisahab** · #3 02-Jan-2009, 15:57

Welcome to the forums, my suggestions are in red.

I really enjoy each second of my vacation. One reason is that I love to have plenty of free time to do whatever I want. When I have a long break I can visit other countries by reading. I can also learn a lot of things, such as cooking and designing; and I can visit all my relatives.

Miss dode · #4 02-Jan-2009, 16:18

I think they already done it :)

ho0opy · #5 02-Jan-2009, 16:21

thank you so much bhaisahab for this helping

**bhaisahab** · #6 02-Jan-2009, 16:25

Hi Miss dode,
Say, I think they have already done it.

**RonBee** · #7 02-Jan-2009, 16:51

Quote:

Originally Posted by ho0opy

thank you so much bhaisahab for your help.

ho0opy · #8 02-Jan-2009, 17:20

thank you Ron Bee

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