what about this?

[RonBee]

Originally Posted by ho0opy

Ok what about the grammar is it correct?

Not really. It does in fact require some interpretation.

Another reason I love to travel during the vacation . I enjoy to visit another country or city .

When you are on vacation you like to travel to another country or city.

I love to see their antiquity and I like to eat in their restaurant with my relative .

You like to look at old houses and eat in restaurants with your sister. Or brother. Or cousin. (The word "relative" doesn't narrow it down much.)

Also before I move from that country I like to buy from their stores because I love to remembers that amazing time when I come back to my country.

Before you come home you like to buy something from one of the shops to bring home with you.

The main reason that I enjoy of my vacation is that we have a lot of wedlock parties .

You enjoy your vacation mainly because when you are on vacation you go to a lot of weddings? Wedding receptions?

I like to go to all that parties because I spend very happy time with all people who I know . I can not imagine my life without exciting vacation.

You like to go to all those parties because you have a very happy time with all the people you know. You cannot imagine your life without having exciting vacations.


How did I do?

[ho0opy]

thank you so much
I do know what can I say to you RonBee and bhaisahab
but really thank you from my heart

[bhaisahab]

If it is from your heart, that is all that is required my friend.