what about this?

ho0opy · #1 02-Jan-2009, 17:22

Another reason I love to travel during the vacation . I enjoy to visit another country or city . I love to see their antiquity and I like to eat in their restaurant with my relative . Also before I move from that country I like to buy from their stores because I love to remembers that amazing time when I come back to my country.
The main reason that I enjoy of my vacation is that we have a lot of wedlock parties . I like to go to all that parties because I spend very happy time with all people who I know . I can not imagine my life without exciting vacation.

**RonBee** · #2 02-Jan-2009, 17:48

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Originally Posted by ho0opy

Another reason I love to travel during the vacation . I enjoy to visit another country or city .

Another reason I love to travel during vacation is I enjoy visiting other countries and cities.

**RonBee** · #3 02-Jan-2009, 17:51

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Originally Posted by ho0opy

I love to see their antiquity, and I like to eat in their restaurant with my relative.

What do you mean by "antiquity" there? Ruins? Old houses?

ho0opy · #4 02-Jan-2009, 17:55

I mean old houses
thank you

**RonBee** · #5 02-Jan-2009, 18:43

You like to visit the shops? You go to a lot of weddings?

ho0opy · #6 03-Jan-2009, 13:48

please help me I need it all corrected

thank you

**RonBee** · #7 03-Jan-2009, 14:51

Well, you can't look at antiquity, but you can look at old houses. With the help of the suggestions you have received you can now do a rewrite. Post it here.

ho0opy · #8 03-Jan-2009, 15:54

Ok what about the grammar is it correct?

ho0opy · #9 03-Jan-2009, 16:50

Another reason I love to travel during the vacation is I enjoy to visit another countries or cities . I love to see their old houses and I like to eat in their restaurant with my relative . Also before I move from that country I like to buy from their shops because I love to remembers that amazing time when I come back to my country.
The main reason that I enjoy of my vacation is that we have a lot of wedlock parties . I like to go to all that parties because I spend very happy time with all people who I know . I can not imagine my life without exciting vacation

**bhaisahab** · #10 03-Jan-2009, 17:09

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Originally Posted by ho0opy

Another reason I love to travel during the vacation is that I enjoy visiting other countries and cities . I love to see their old houses and I like to eat in their restaurants with my relatives. Also, before leaving that country I like to buy souvenirs from the local shops, because I love to have things to remind me of that amazing time when get back to my own country.
The main reason that I enjoy my vacations is that we have a lot of marriage parties. I like to go to all these parties because, at them, I spend a very happy time with all my friends and family. I can not imagine my life without exciting vacations.

I have made some corrections, while trying not to interfere too much with your style of writing.

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