[Grammar] Correct my grammer in the letter

[netpicker9]

Hi,

please correct my letter...


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My name is Seshu.

Mr.John has asked me contact you regarding a job position that you have. I have been working with XYZ company since 2000.

I work on open systems side (web and windows application development).

If possible, please let me know your contact number so that I can call and discuss about the job requirement.

You can even reply to this email along with all the details.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Best Regards,

[netpicker9]

hi,

any one?

[Vamsy]

Originally Posted by netpicker9

Hi,

please correct my letter...


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Dear netpicker9
First of all it is grammar not grammer
The following are the corrections that are necessary

My name is Seshu,

Mr.John has asked me to contact you regarding a job position that you have. I have been working with XYZ company since 2000.

I work on open systems side (web and windows application development).

If possible, please let me know your contact number so that I can call and discuss about the job requirement.

You can even reply to this email along with all the details.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Best Regards,

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job/position are the same, use only one. Either one is acceptable.

discuss about is incorrect, use disscuss the job requirements.

I am not a teacher.