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Dear Mr. ....,

This is to inform you that Mr. ABC has been retired and Mr. XYZ is no more dealing matter related raw materials inquiries and others. You are requested to please mark all your emails to shanz@mail.com instead of Mr. ABC & Mr. XYZ.

Best regards,
Shanz

Dear Mr. ....,

This is to inform you that Mr. ABC has retired, and Mr. XYZ is no longer dealing with matters relating to raw materials inquiries. Please address your emails to shanz@mail.com instead of Mr. ABC and Mr. XYZ.

Best regards,

Shanz

Thank you for your kind correction. I shall appreciate if you kindly review if the “HAS” should be there before “RETIRED” for I feel that though the word is both transitive and intransitive however here it is used as transitive to show that an action was done on him instead he did an action. Maybe my little brain is working otherwise however I shall appreciate if you could again reassure me with your depiction of putting “HAS”. I suppose it should be either as “Mr. ABC has been retired” or “Mr. ABC retired from services”.

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Originally Posted by shanz

Thank you for your kind correction. I shall appreciate if you kindly review if the “HAS” should be there before “RETIRED” for I feel that though the word is both transitive and intransitive however here it is used as transitive to show that an action was done on him instead he did an action. Maybe my little brain is working otherwise however I shall appreciate if you could again reassure me with your depiction of putting “HAS”. I suppose it should be either as “Mr. ABC has been retired” or “Mr. ABC retired from services”.

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Mr ABC has (recently) retired.
Mr ABC has (recently) been fired.

Alternatively,

Mr ABC is no longer with us/our company.