
14-Jan-2009, 18:11
|
 | Junior Member | | Join Date: Dec 2008
Posts: 69
Member Type: English Teacher | |
Re: Is this correct? Quote:
Originally Posted by ho0opy I have three main goals for my future. First of all, I want to finish my education . Now I am student at University and I want to complete my study to graduate in my specialization . Because I love (to) being an educated person. Moreover I want to be a successful teacher after finishing my education.
Next, I want to take a long trip around the world. One year (s) ago , I had a long trip around my kingdom. I saw lots of amazing things during that nice trip such as (I saw) Al-Fisaleh tower and I enjoy ed taking a photo of it . In my long trip around the world I want to visit lots of countr ies such as kanda, France, Italy and Brazil. I love all of that countr ies and I hope I can visit them in my future to see (an) amazing things in all of them(that country).
My last main goal is getting married with(from) an English teacher , Because I love to talk in that (by to) language with others , and I want my children to learn the English language from their father and mother . I also think when I get (ting) married with an English teache r, he will help me to improve my English .Finally, I hope I can achiev e(ing) all of these goals in my near future.
plz help me   |
*leave out all between brackets
*try to use more synonyms in order not to repeat always the same verbs (eg. 'want, as in your text) |