am I right??

[Miss dode]

hi
I wanna u to check what I write here if any grammar mistake


I have four main goals for the next few years. First of all, I want to graduate from my college with a high grade. I always work hard and spend lots of time work on my assignment and quizzes to achieve this goal. My second goal is go to Australia to get my master's degree in historical linguistics. Because I am interested to study language change . I also think historical linguistics is a unique specialization. My third goal is take a trip and visit some countries like France, Italy, China and Britain. I want to visit the most beautiful places and I want to see the famous places like Venice in Italy and big pen watch in Britain . My last goal is lose about seven-nine kilo because I want my body to be perfect and healthy body. Inconcluion, I will work hard to achieve my four goals.

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I wanna u to check what I write here if any grammar mistake

I would like you to check what I have written here, to see if there are any grammar mistakes.
To say I wanna u is very poor English.

I don't know how to strike out an incorrect word on this site, so I have just re-typed the whole thing as I think it should be.

I have four main goals for the next few years. First of all, I want to graduate from my college with a high grade. I always work hard and spend lots of time on my work assignments and quizzes to achieve this goal.

My second goal is go to Australia to get my Master's degree in historical linguistics, because I am interested in studying language changes . I also think historical linguistics is a unique specialization.

My third goal is take a trip and visit some countries like France, Italy, China and Britain. I want to visit the most beautiful places and I want to see the famous places like Venice in Italy and Big Ben clocktower in Britain .

My last goal is lose about seven-nine kilos because I want my body to be perfect and healthy. Inconcluion, I will work hard to achieve my four goals.

[Miss dode]

Thank u for ur help ^ ^

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Originally Posted by Miss dode

Thank u for ur help ^ ^

I think it should be the Big Ben Clocktower.

[Miss dode]

ok
is that only the grammar mistake I have made it ??

[RonBee]

Say:

I want to graduate from college with high grades.

I don't care for In conclusion. (Everybody says it.) How about:

I look forward happily towards achieving my goals.

[Miss dode]

thanks alot :)