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Old 22-Jan-2009, 05:18
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Dear Brian,


Thank you for your email.

We have already sent you the swift document of the payment proof upon your request against Proforma No. 210383 in July 15, 2008 please go through below mentioned emails. Anyway, I am once again attaching the swift document of payment for your reference with a request to acknowledge the receipt of payment and update us about shipment status.

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Dear Brian,


Thank you for your email.

We have already sent you the swift document of (the) payment proof against Performa No. 210383 upon your request on (in) July 15, 2008. Please go through the under (below) mentioned emails. Anyway, I am once again attaching the swift document of payment for your reference with a request to acknowledge the receipt of payment and to update us about shipment status.


Best regards,
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