Application Letter

[Tellthetruth]

Hi, could you check my letter? Thanks

Dear Anne and Dave Prendergast,

I’m writing with regard to your advertisement for working on HOLIDAY FARM and practice my English.
I am not a native English speaker, even though I have been studying it for ten years at school and I need to practice my speaking, so I hope this will be the chance to do it.
I’m 18 years old and I attend High School Specialising in classical subjects. I usually work every summer and I got used to hard work: two years ago I worked for three months as waiter in a restaurant and last year as a shopping assistant.
I would like to know a piece of information about the job. I would prefer to choose the working hours, is it possible? How much is the pay? Is the work really hard?
I hope the accommodation is good but you did not write on the advertisement if it is a single or double room.
Furthermore I am interested in knowing if the lessons are private or no, and if the teacher is an English native speaker.

Yours Sincerely

Luca

[RonBee]

I’m writing with regard to your advertisement for working on HOLIDAY FARM and practice my English.

I’m writing with regard to your advertisement for employment at Holiday Farm.

I am not a native English speaker, even though I have been studying it for ten years at school and I need to practice my speaking, so I hope this will be the chance to do it.

I am not a native English speaker, and even though I have been studying English for ten years at school I need to practice my speaking skills. I hope this will be a chance to do so.

[Tellthetruth]

Thanks a lot!

[RonBee]

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I’m 18 years old and I attend High School Specialising in classical subjects. I usually work every summer and I got used to hard work: two years ago I worked for three months as waiter in a restaurant and last year as a shopping assistant.

I’m 18 years old and I attend a high school specializing in classical subjects. I usually work every summer and I got used to hard work. Two years ago I worked for three months as waiter in a restaurant, and last year I worked as a shopping assistant.

I would like to know a piece of information about the job. I would prefer to choose the working hours, is it possible? How much is the pay? Is the work really hard?

I need to know a couple of things about the job. I would prefer to choose the working hours. Is that possible? How much is the pay? Is the work really hard?

I hope the accommodation is good but you did not write on the advertisement if it is a single or double room.

I hope the accommodations are good, but you did not say in the advertisement if the room is a single or a double.

Furthermore I am interested in knowing if the lessons are private or no, and if the teacher is an English native speaker.

Furthermore, I am interested in knowing if the lessons are private or not and if the teacher is an English native speaker.

What do you think?