Please proofread my email... Thanks

[shanz]

Dear Brian ,

Thank you for your email.

Refer to my subsequent emails below and swift documentary proof of payment against your Performa No. 210383 we have already transmitted the funds in your account on July 15, 2008. I am once again attaching the swift document of payment for your reference with a request to check with your bank and acknowledge the receipt of payment. Please instruct your bank to check the payment in the name of Al Zarooni, Deira Dubai as Ordering Customer as mentioned in the attached transaction slip.


Best regards,
Shanz

[mayilmani]

can you help me thanks letter for my salary increased

Thank you

[shanz]

Originally Posted by mayilmani

can you help me thanks letter for my salary increased

Thank you

Hello mayilmani,

I m not a teacher. i posted my letter for correction.

you just try to write letter yourself and post here, teachers or any native speaker will help you to make your letter in order.

Hope you understand.

All the best,
Shanz