formal letter of application please correct where needed
please help me to make this letter as correct and clear as posible. I will skip some details on purpose.
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Attn. The Secretary General
Ref: membership proposal
Please accept this letter as our formal application for membership as we have been asked by the Executive Secretary.
FPMR"E-D" (RMPF "E-D"- the name translated in English) jointly represents the the maritime pilots which are associated as follows:
-APMR -maritime pilots for theports ;
-ADSPA- river-maritime pilots for < river>.
We will be proud if will accept us as member and we will do our best to prove it is worth.
Looking forward to hearing from you,
Re: formal letter of application please correct where needed
Please !!! Can you waste a little time on me ?!
It will help me a lot to have it corrected/ confirmed this evening.