formal letter of application please correct where needed
Hello,
please help me to make this letter as correct and clear as posible. I will skip some details on purpose.
FPMR "E-D"
Street :# STREET
Attn. The Secretary General
#
Dear Mr.
Ref: membership proposal
Please accept this letter as our formal application for membership as we have been asked by the Executive Secretary.
FPMR"E-D" (RMPF "E-D"- the name translated in English) jointly represents the the
maritime pilots which are associated as follows:
-APMR -maritime pilots for theports ;
-ADSPA- river-maritime pilots for < river>.
We will be proud if will accept us as member and we will do our best to prove it is worth.
Looking forward to hearing from you,
Yours sincerely
<Name><br />
President</div></blockquote> </div> </li><li class="postbit blockbody" id="post_2"> <div class="header"> <div class="datetime">01-Feb-2009, 06:04</div> <span class="username">cic</span> </div> <div class="title">Re: formal letter of application please correct where needed</div> <div class="content"> <blockquote class="restore">Please !!! Can you waste a little time on me ?!<br />
It will help me a lot to have it corrected/ confirmed this evening.<br />
Thank you!<br />
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