Please advise me... Thanks

[shanz]

Dear Teachers..... please go through my below mentioned email reply and advise me the word HOWEVER i used is okay? or should i replace with any other word?




Dear Mr. Prakash,

Thank you for your email.

The price you have quoted is still on higher side. However, we can conclude this deal @US$ 58.00 / Kg.

Please confirm and send us Proforma Invoice for establishment of LC at sight.

Best regards,
Shanz

[rks]

Originally Posted by shanz

Dear Teachers..... please go through my below mentioned email reply and advise me the word HOWEVER i used is okay? or should i replace with any other word?




Dear Mr. Prakash,

Thank you for your email.

The price you have quoted is still on higher side. However, we can conclude this deal @US$ 58.00 / Kg.

Please confirm and send us the Proforma Invoice for establishment of LC at site.

Best regards,
Shanz

(not a teacher)
I think this would be OK or you may say.... The price quoted by you is exorbitant, hence, we may conclude this deal @ US$ 58.00 /kg

[shanz]

Thank you so much for your corrections & advise.

[Anglika]

Dear Mr. Prakash,

Thank you for your email.

The price you have quoted is still on the high side. However, we can conclude this deal @US$ 58.00 / Kg.

Please confirm and send us your Proforma Invoice for establishment of LC at sight.

[thod00]

Since others have already made suggestions I wont add more. However I dont understand what "for establishment of LC at sight." means.

[thedaffodils]

Originally Posted by thod00

Since others have already made suggestions I wont add more. However I dont understand what "for establishment of LC at sight." means.

It refers to the payment term- L/C at sight. L/C is short for letter of credit.