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Old 16-Feb-2009, 09:54
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Dear Mr. Faran,

Thank you for your email dated 09.02.2009.

Our annual consumption is 50 Kgs (approx.) as such on the basis of our annual consumption we can import 50 Kgs maximum.

I will request you to please reconsider your MOQ(Minimum Order Quantity) for us.

Looking forward for your favorable response.

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Dear Mr. Faran,

Thank you for your email dated 09.02.2009.

Our annual consumption is 50 Kgs (approx.) and as such based on (the basis of) our annual consumption, we can import 50 Kgs at the maximum.

Hence, I would (will) request you to please reconsider your MOQ(Minimum Order Quantity) for us.

Looking forward to (for) your favorable response.

Best regards,
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Thank you so much for your corrections.....

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