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please advice me about this letter Thanks
Topic: A letter of complain about poor services in hospital in an emergency condition.(Ielts)
Dear Sir or Madam ,
I write this letter to complaining about poor services in emergency section of your hospital.
As,my daughter,9 years old,eventually sensed a sever pain in her stomach yesterday, March, 24 ,2009 .After I contacted to emergency health center ,under their instruction ,brought her to hospital at 10:30 a.m. ,and been accepted in emergency section .But , surprisingly in spite of continuous appeals my daughter held without any concern for about 4 hours.
During this miserable period which was full of fear and pain , most of your stuff ignored our case .Finally one of doctors through his way had a visit , and realized that she needs urgent treatment .Then all steps were taken .
As,you certainly know that emergency section is one of the most important parts of any hospital.For preventing some later events , I ask you to perform an inquiry in this case to finding out reasons and responsible.
I look forward to hearing from you
Re: please advice me about this letter Thanks
1: Establish who is in charge of complaints, and use their title and/or name:
Originally Posted by salza
Dr J. Smith,
Manager, A&E Department
Dear Dr Smith,
2: ALWAYS one space following punctuation, not preceding it.
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