please check this sentence. (for a motivation letter)
I need your kind help. I want to write about my deploma design project.
Does the following sentence make sense?
In my fourth year, the focus was on design and I completed my diploma design project, whose theme was a design for a complex of housing and commercial space considered the characteristics of the city, XXX.
Thank you in advance.
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