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Dear Mr. xxx

Please arrange transport to lift the export consignment (2 pallets) for Yangon, Myanmar on Thursday 02.07.2009 and email us the transport details & contact person name. Documents will be delivered to you by tomorrow through our messenger Mr. Masood Javed.


Please note that last time we faced the problem while loading the pallets due to non availability of side-opening in the Mazda (Truck), therefore kindly ensure that the truck must have a side-opening for our ease.


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(Please let me know if there is any particular word for Truck side-opening or the opening from the back side)
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Dear Mr. xxx

Please arrange transport to lift the export consignment (2 pallets) for Yangon, Myanmar on Thursday 02.07.2009 and email us the transport details & contact person name. Documents will be delivered to you by tomorrow through our messenger Mr. Masood Javed.


Please note that last time we faced the problem while loading the pallets due to non availability of side-opening in the Mazda (Truck), therefore kindly ensure that the truck must have a side-opening for our ease.


Best regards,
Shanz

(Please let me know if there is any particular word for Truck side-opening or the opening from the back side)
Dear Mr. xxx

Please arrange transport
for (to) lifting the export consignment (2 pallets) from (for) Yangon, Myanmar on Thursday 02.07.2009 and email us the transport details as well as our (&) contact person by
name. Documents will be delivered to you by tomorrow through our messenger Mr. Masood Javed.


Please note that last time we faced (the) problem while loading the pallets due to non availability
/provision of side-opening in the Mazda (Truck). Therefore kindly ensure that the truck must have a side-opening for our convenience/
ease.


Best regards,
Shanz

(Please let me know if there is any particular word for Truck side-opening or the opening from the back side,
I do not find any particular word but inplace of availability use ‘provision’)

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Old 02-Jul-2009, 06:26
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Thank you so much for your correction.

In first para I think some misunderstanding... consignment is lying in our factory warehouse and we will import to Myanmar, so i m writing to my logistic company to arrange transport for lifting the consignment to the port for dispatch.

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