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Old 01-Jul-2009, 07:43
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It is to inform you that the export consignment for Golden Hawks International, Myanmar will be dispatched by tomorrow.

Kindly get the consignment ready.

Best regards,
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Old 01-Jul-2009, 12:38
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This is to inform you that the export consignment for Golden Hawks International, Myanmar, is to be dispatched by tomorrow. Please make the consignment ready for collection.

Kindly get the consignment ready.


Best regards,

You really need to give the warehouse a time and date for this collection. "By tomorrow" is far too vague and open to misinterpretation.
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