kadioguy
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- Mar 4, 2017
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- Student or Learner
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- Chinese
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- Taiwan
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Japan attacked Taiwan in 1895, when large amount of Japanese fleets invaded Taiwan, in order to calm their solders, all fleets had their own Buddhist preachers.
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Is it a run-on sentence? I would use either (a) or (b) below. What do you think?
a. Japan attacked Taiwan in 1895, when large amount of Japanese fleets invaded Taiwan; in order to calm their solders, all fleets had their own Buddhist preachers.
b. Japan attacked Taiwan in 1895, when large amount of Japanese fleets invaded Taiwan. In order to calm their solders, all fleets had their own Buddhist preachers.
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Japan attacked Taiwan in 1895, when large amount of Japanese fleets invaded Taiwan, in order to calm their solders, all fleets had their own Buddhist preachers.
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Is it a run-on sentence? I would use either (a) or (b) below. What do you think?
a. Japan attacked Taiwan in 1895, when large amount of Japanese fleets invaded Taiwan; in order to calm their solders, all fleets had their own Buddhist preachers.
b. Japan attacked Taiwan in 1895, when large amount of Japanese fleets invaded Taiwan. In order to calm their solders, all fleets had their own Buddhist preachers.
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