[Vocabulary] sentence correction

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fazakir

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Being a teacher I write daily reports and I mention like this

1." The students came before (or in front of) the class and spoke about the importance of the day to their (or with their) classmates".

2. Interacted with the students near the buses and asked them to converse in english

3. students made a lot of mistake while the writing the test given...

plz correct the sentence.. thank you
 

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Being a teacher I write daily reports and I mention like this

1." The students came before (or in front of) the class and spoke about the importance of the day to their (or with their) classmates". See below

2. I interacted with the students near the buses and asked them to converse in English

3. The students made a lot of mistake [STRIKE]while the writing the test given..[/STRIKE] on the writing test.

plz correct the sentence.. thank you

1. The students spoke in front of the class about their day. -- Omit unnecessary words. If they spoke in front of the class, then naturally they spoke to their classmates.
 

fazakir

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Thank you very much Mr. barb( sorry I don't know ur full name). I am new to this forum and I am really glad to have ur answers to my questions... thank once again...
 

Rover_KE

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Welcome to the board, fazakir.

Barb is not a Mr.

The avatar (picture preceding the name) is a clue to her being female, and you don't need to know her full name (none of us do).

Please use standard English and write 'your' instead of 'ur' etc.

Rover
 
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