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Is the first dash "—" used correctly here? With it, "a condition" would seem to refer to "antibodies" or "a second infection" and cause confusion. The following words clearly point to this condition refers to "sterilizing immunity", which is different from antibodies that bestows our body long lasting immunity.
Should the dash be removed? I am not very sure.
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Immunity to the Coronavirus May Last Years, New Data Hint
Blood samples from recovered patients suggest a powerful, long-lasting immune response, researchers reported.
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But many immunologists have noted that it is natural for antibody levels to drop. Besides, antibodies are just one arm of the immune system.
Although antibodies in the blood are needed to block the virus and forestall a second infection — a condition known as sterilizing immunity — immune cells that “remember” the virus more often are responsible for preventing serious illness.
Source: New York Times
https://www.nytimes.com/2020/11/17/health/coronavirus-immunity.html
Should the dash be removed? I am not very sure.
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Immunity to the Coronavirus May Last Years, New Data Hint
Blood samples from recovered patients suggest a powerful, long-lasting immune response, researchers reported.
......................
But many immunologists have noted that it is natural for antibody levels to drop. Besides, antibodies are just one arm of the immune system.
Although antibodies in the blood are needed to block the virus and forestall a second infection — a condition known as sterilizing immunity — immune cells that “remember” the virus more often are responsible for preventing serious illness.
Source: New York Times
https://www.nytimes.com/2020/11/17/health/coronavirus-immunity.html