[Essay] I need a letter

[Todirica Laurentiu]

Hello, I`am student from Romania. I wrote here because i need someone who can help me with a homework. I don`t speak english very well, that`s the reason i have to acces this forum. If anyone can help , please do it!
So, this is what i have to do:
Your school is planning a musical concert to give students the chance to perfom in public and raise money for school funds. Information about the concert has been published on the school website, with a request for comments and suggestions. You decide to write to the Principal. Read the web page below and the provision programme on wich you have made notes. Write a letter to the Principal outlining your reactions to the concert and making suggestions with your reason.

Concert Saturday June 15th
Performers of all ages and abilities welcome-take your chance to perform in public. Rehearsals will be held between 10-14 the June(long enough?) so that everyone will be fuly prepared. Just fill in the form and come along.
NAME:
INSTRUMENT PLAYEDWhat about the dancers?)
LEVEL ACHIEDWhy?)
TYPE OF MUSIC:
REASONS FOR PARTICIPATING:


Provisional programme
First half:
Classical music
Classical dance(Boring!Mix them up?)

Second half:
Modern music/groups
Modern dance

Seat prices: ₤10
Students: ₤9(Too expensive/other wayse to raise money?)
Proceeds to school funds

WRITE YOUR LETTER IN 180-220 WORDS.

Please help me with this one. Thanks a lot

 

[Todirica Laurentiu]

Re: Writing relative/participle clauses and noun/prepositional phrases (II)

Can you help me with a letter SOthing Dave ? Look please at my post!

 

[SoothingDave]

Re: Writing relative/participle clauses and noun/prepositional phrases (II)

Can you help me with a letter SOthing Dave ? Look please at my post!

We don't do your homework for you. You write the letter and we'll help you with it.

 

[Todirica Laurentiu]

Re: Writing relative/participle clauses and noun/prepositional phrases (II)

Sir you are right but I do not speak English well, I `am a student from Romania, I just need a little help that`s why i need help..Thanks !Just some ideas!

 

[emsr2d2]

We do not do homework for students. Write the 180-200 word essay and submit it to your teacher. When your teacher gives it back, look at the corrections. If you don't understand them, post the specific sentences or words you have a problem with and then we can help. Your teacher wants to see YOUR work, not our work.

 

[Tdol]

How does someone writing your letter for you help you? It may help you get a mark, but you won't have learned anything.

 

[charliedeut]

However, you can get tips about writing. Here is one: use short sentences. They are easier to write, so you are less likely to make mistakes. That will help you more than someone writing the letter for you.

 

[Rover_KE]

Put your pointer on Resources at the top of the page and click on Letter Writing for further help.

Rover