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    History

    Some people think that studying from the past offers no benefits to today's life while others believe that history is an important source of information.
    Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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    No one can deny that history is a mirror of the present. Hence, it is important to be studied and analyzed. Some people think that focus on applied sciences is the shortest path to prosperity and luxury.


    On the one hand, I find history as a very interesting subject to study and an infinite resource of experience that we can draw from. Moreover, well-documented history preserves rights and treaties between nations.


    On the other hand, studying applied sciences resulted in a much more productive life. scientists are usually ahead of what is possible, shaping our future.


    In summary, Historical studies are vital to keeping our heritage, rights, and nationality. It is a must to keep the balance between history and future which are represented respectively by historical and scientific studies.
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    it is a short essay, but it is my first trial for task 2.
    Could you please comment on this essay? Does anything sound odd ?
    Last edited by ahmednasha2y; 01-Oct-2016 at 09:58.

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    Re: History

    Yes, it's way too short. You need around 250-300 words. You need more body in your body paragraphs!

    You also need to know how to structure an essay. Have a look at the thread below.

    https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/t...should-be-free

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